Darkenius Storm
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Posts : 30
Join date : 2013-07-31
 |  Subject: Darkenius Storm and Zeno Kichi backstage segment (1st september)  Fri Aug 30, 2013 7:12 pm | |
| Zeno Kichi runs through the backstage floors and looks for Darkenius Storm. He talks to random guys.Zeno Kichi: Have you seen Darkenius Storm?Guy: No.Zeno Kichi: And you? Have you seen Darkenius Storm?Guy2: Yeah, he went that way a little while ago.Zeno Kichi runs to the parking lot, where he sees Darkenius harming Shina.Shina Scarlet: Let go of me! Don't touch me, you bastard! Help me somebody, help!Zeno Kichi: Let go of her! You monster!Shina Scarlet: Zeno! Help me!Darkenius: At last, you finally showed up!Darkenius Storm released Shina and runs toward to Zeno. He were ready to strike with his finisher, but Zeno dodged and began to serve punches and kicks on Darkenius. Darkenius blocked Zeno's last punches and throwed him on the car. Then he served him a couple of kicks. Then Darkenius throwed a trash can on him and escaped.Shina Scarlet: Are you alright, Zeno?Zeno, bleeding on his face, calmly stands and says:Zeno Kichi: Don't worry about me, I'm alright.Zeno goes on his own to the locker room.Because you were inactive for a while here, I wrote up your part, Zeno. You can change it, how you want  | |
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Edgar
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Join date : 2013-08-27
| | Subject: Re: Darkenius Storm and Zeno Kichi backstage segment (1st september) Fri Aug 30, 2013 8:43 pm | |
| Nice RP mate, here I spell-checked it and corrected some grammatical mistakes:  Zeno Kichi runs through the backstage floors and looks for Darkenius Storm. He talks to random guys.Zeno Kichi: Have you seen Darkenius Storm?Guy: No.Zeno Kichi: And you? Have you seen Darkenius Storm?Guy2: Yeah, he went that way a little while ago.Zeno Kichi runs to the parking lot, where he sees Darkenius harming Shina.Shina Scarlet: Let go of me! Don't touch me, you bastard! Help me somebody, help!Zeno Kichi: Let go of her! You monster!Shina Scarlet: Zeno! Help me!Darkenius: At last, you finally showed up!Darkenius Storm releases Shina and runs toward to Zeno. He immediately strikes Zeno with his finisher, but Zeno dodges and begins to serve punches. Zeno then kicks Darkenius. Darkenius blocks Zeno's last punches and throws him in the car. Darkenius Storm delivers a few kicks. Then Darkenius tosses a trash can and hits Zeno accurately.Shina Scarlet: Are you alright, Zeno?Zeno, bleeding on his face, calmly stands and says:Zeno Kichi: Don't worry about me, I'm alright.Zeno goes to his own locker room. | |
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